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How do women escape?

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He said-

''Hey see this?  this and that?

-he pointed at the washing-

then get it sorted.''

She said-

''where's the friggin money?''

The window cleaner avoided eye contact.

She said-

''there's no tea!''

He sat quiet.

She walked into the kitchen

- touched a swelling eye-

and planned her escape.

 

words and foto T Carroll

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 30th Apr 2013 12:41

Why the photo anyway, I did wonder? Murder implied? If so, not really fair.

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 29th Apr 2013 18:02

Alex the foto is of my blood on the bedroom floor- after an epileptic fit.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 29th Apr 2013 11:01

Short and savage, every character a victim, even the eye witness. The title is excellent - that electric fencing between wishes, needs and action.

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