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00:01
and as it takes
a second to leave
what once was
it becomes
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and her perfume
is resolved into
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and the dial-tone
repeats
as
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emerges and Tom Waits'
closes and Martha
bleeds from the heart
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''out walking in the rain''
where are you?
and footsteps
washed in tearfull
ablutions
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00:07
00:08
...
words and foto T Carroll
Graham Sherwood
Tue 14th May 2013 22:42
What a very clever form this takes Tommy, really, really innovative, the sort of thing you wish you'd done yourself. Well done! Left frustratingly hanging. Graham