Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

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entry picture

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and as it takes

a second to leave

what once was

it becomes

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and her perfume 

is resolved into

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and the dial-tone

repeats

as 

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emerges and Tom Waits'

closes and Martha

bleeds from the heart

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''out walking in the rain''

where are you?

and footsteps 

washed in tearfull

ablutions

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words and foto T Carroll

 

 

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 14th May 2013 22:42

What a very clever form this takes Tommy, really, really innovative, the sort of thing you wish you'd done yourself. Well done! Left frustratingly hanging. Graham

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George Stanworth

Tue 14th May 2013 14:49

Very original. Enjoyed this. Love your style.

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