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Her

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She is beautiful and she needs me.

We are whole together and nothing can stop us.

Her eyes are white blue

like two tiny oceans

and rupture my soul when they look

at four in the morning

crying for insects

and packing a screen.

 

Her smile is a testament of bliss,

her kiss, a flowery touch,

an assuring thing

and all her faults are pure.

 

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We sit by the sea.

We feel the beach on our feet,

her kiss on my neck.

Nothing to miss but the moment

and as it happens, happiness heaves

its pure milk on our new light.

 

I am elated by her presence

because she is beautiful and she needs me.

Her flesh grasp is my laughter,

her hair is of wiry yellow

 

she turns to me in slow motion,

waves a smile and tells me

she will always love me

 

and then I wake up.

◄ Our Fault Is Urge

The Last Star ►

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Rachel Bond

Fri 23rd Aug 2013 15:02

It was the greatest night of my life
Although I still had not found a wife
I had my friends right there beside me


We scaled the wall
We tripped thru the graveyard
Ancient shapes were all around us
No music but the wet grass felt fresh beside the fog
Two made love in a silent spot
one chased a rabbit into the dark
A girl got drunk & made the dead
And I gave empty sermons to my head
Cemetery cool & quiet
Hate to leave
your sacred lay
Dread the milky coming of the day.

poetry: Jim Morrison

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Rachel Bond

Thu 9th May 2013 17:44

thank isobel..love is only a sad recollection for me. this poem is beautiful because it is poured with innocence and naivity, i like the milk imagery. a mothers milk cooling carnal fires. breast milk, asses milk sweet with seduction. if i didnt know better i would mistake kealan for a sweet sensitive soul that has yet to be truley burnt, on the beach or anywhere, even in dream. i like a nice love dream, it seems even they are rare as black sand today. they exist for sure, loads of them but on someone elses shore..haha sorry im a miserable bugger xx

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Isobel

Thu 9th May 2013 12:48

I really like Rachel's comment there - it's such a sad poetic reflection on the pursuit of love.

There are some incredibly raw, natural elements to this Kealan.

'happiness heaves
its pure milk on our new light'

I could never have thought that line up in a month of Sundays - but it seems right.

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Rachel Bond

Thu 9th May 2013 03:44

We all get lost on the beach looking for love in our dreams truth is the tide comes in like an awakening and we find all the cockle pickers dead..

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David Blake

Wed 8th May 2013 15:05

Enjoyed this very much. Thanks - David.

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