Good Morning, Good Morning
great stuff. i love the idea of last night's ghosts scurrying home and the lazy cat. Then comes the abrupt disturbance of the peace by the LGV - a great contrast and the whole poem woven seamlessly together by the cat's comment - delicious!
( I half expected the response to the question to be - 'fertilised')
Thank you. It was wake up, scribble, move, scribble this morning
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 18th May 2013 17:46
nothing scrambled
about this very,very,good poem.xx
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 19th May 2013 11:26
enjoyed this poem Paul,very much.x