As if to care
Was I the only one now on the beach?
She had stood behind me,
we had both waited- awkwardly.
She decided then to go,
I surmised- by the sound that
the soft tread of departure makes
on sand...
Sunsets care nothing for dimming shadows
nor waves sigh, that they must lap and fill
the printed pools left by feet.
How hard to turn and not look
back to what once was defined
by her gaze- her thinking that
pulled all about- towards her,
as if to listen,
as if to care.
words and foto T Carroll
Andy N
Fri 24th May 2013 12:45
i'm with ian on this piece, tommy. very very visual. can almost smell the waves here.
the last two lines particularly finish it well.
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