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Inheritance

My father stands at the stove,

I remember him;

four burners fired up,

in control, hassle free,

exercising his cookery wisdom

for the dinner table.

All I have is his book -

precise, neatly inked recipes,

each page a culinary lesson-

A temptation to try,

or an invitation to fail?

Maybe I could souse a herring

and create ham baskets.

Would my slender attempts match up,

or would I hear the whisper

over my shoulder...

"Too much salt Sian

too much salt".

◄ Appeal to the 'Bar'

In Memory of Pine ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5870)

Sun 15th Feb 2009 16:42

Wonderful, Sian, those handwritten recipes a living reminder. Like my mom's, I surely can relate. JT

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 15th Feb 2009 12:36

Hi Sian,
I enjoyed the "show-not-tell" qualities within this that hint at the relationship between father and daughter. A light but very deft touch.
Regards,
A.E.

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