In Memory of Pine
(I realise that we are way past January but having noticed the posting today "Hum Bug" I thought ...why not. The format is concrete poetry so needs to be viewed on my personal page.)
Sian
Jan
-uary
beckons,
post-festive
joylessness envelops
even the most cheerful.
Time to strip the decked halls of their
holly. "We wish you a Merry Christmas" as distant
as childhood.
Now I wish for a cozy cottage
with warm fire and soft armchair. To
sit with slippers and dressing gown by the
Christmas tree. Instead I bravely bring in the
New Year,
in queues
with other
down turned
mouths, staring through
the postoffice window
at the men who came
and hacked, chopped
and chipped the town
tree...until all that was
left was a memory of
pine in the cold air.
<Deleted User> (5812)
Mon 16th Feb 2009 13:03
very good! it's so well thought out. the picture postcard ideal of xmas that we're bombarded with is a far cry from the reality- especially when you're the mum who has to organize it all! you have a lovely tenderness and warmth in your writing- in all the pieces. x