Deep within its depths
it strikes you like a chord
An aria known only to you
You follow along your path
searching
for something to connect with
Another soul
binds you
until you break free
You are not like the others
They do not understand
You
are alone
feel the void
expand with every breath
And yet you go on
loving your own voice
<Deleted User> (11459)
Mon 30th Sep 2013 11:07
je trouve ça très-agréable!
Enjoyed this - beauitfully wrote x
Hi Francine, I like the way you have managed to get a feeling of disconnection in this work. A good interpretation of the subject matter.
Cate xx
And I love your voice too Francine - am so glad to have you back - WOL wouldn't be WOL without you!
I love this. Love the title and the ideas and the disconnected structure you have used - it really goes well with what you are expressing.
I also like the paradoxes - the appreciation of self within all of the loneliness.
You
are alone
feel the void
expand with every breath
And yet you go on
loving your own voice
Beautiful x
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barrie singleton
Tue 22nd Oct 2013 02:00
Hi Francine,I am itching to be a Philistine (no, I AM a Philistine) I am itching to release my Inner Philistine to say: "I DO love my own voice" but I won't. Sorry I pushed off and left kind comments hanging. Mea crappa. A very etherial concept. Not easy for my kind of bloke.
But I sense a ripple in the Force. Bon!