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THE FOLLY OF YOUTH

THE FOLLY OF YOUTH.

 

Judge me not.

Have you forgotten

Decisions you once made?

Would you not trade

An hour in time?

To return and put right a crime

Stitched from impulsive youth.

Go back and see the truth.

Unpick the lies,

Prove there were no flies

On you.

The young man who

Believed he was the king of cool.

Only to prove,

He was just another fool

Who tried so hard to be accepted,

But in the end was to be rejected

By his peers.

There were no tears,

No fears.

Only hollow confidence.

Solid impudence

To believe you knew it all

As you stood tall.

The inevitable fall from grace

Waiting to bury you without a trace,

No matter how much noise you made.

No matter how you threatened

To throw yourself upon the blade

Of fame.

You were still the same

Fool.

Whose only tool

Was your tongue

Which proved

Not quite long enough

To wrap around the

Overstated world

Created by the

Mind which finds you here.

Being me,

Judging me.

Seeing me for the first time

In the flesh.

No safety net.

Not simply a reflection.

A selection of what you want to see.

This is the reality.

Not bad though

After all is said

For a boy who was the best

Inside his head.

He wasn’t,

But it seems he stood the test of time.

And now finds writing lines

Is the sentence he was given

And in writing lines has been forgiven

For his youth.

 

© By: - Pete Slater.   2013.

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Shirley Smothers

Mon 26th Aug 2013 16:55

Nice poem. Everyone has regrets. This poem states this very well. Sometimes I think I still make the same dumb mistakes.
Your poem makes one pause and consider their lives.

Good writing
Shirley

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 26th Aug 2013 16:23

This could just as easily been called
"Backwards - And Forwards". A well-considered
essay on then - and now; the presumption and
ego of youth revisited by the self-awareness
that age brings.

<Deleted User> (8730)

Mon 26th Aug 2013 09:58

Good poem, good ending. We all live our lives with some regrets. Mine is illness. When I am well I just trying and help people and be nice to people. One of the ways I do this is via poetry. I have read poetry on James Cook Hospital Radio, Radio Tees, Radio Teesdale, Middlesbrough Community FM and Bishop FM as a result. And I am talking about brain hemorrhage, Ulcerative Colitis, Acute Rheumatoid Arthritis and bi-polar mood disorder. The latter has certainly brought me some scrapes in life but some great experiences too....

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