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Though I'm not a Shropshire lad

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When every lad and every lass
that ever shared my bed
must find beneath the graveyard grass
a place to lay their head,
beneath their sheets, bereft of breath,
then shall I shed a tear
and sketch a stanza on their death
and drink another beer.

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 17th Mar 2014 11:33

Clever, and brief, and up-to-date. Like those earlier bards who jingled off topical lines that set the common folk howling with glee. With considerable skill too.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 27th Sep 2013 21:01

Neat and petite...
That's quite a feat!

Philipos

Fri 27th Sep 2013 20:43

Poignant and tightly expressed.

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Starfish

Thu 26th Sep 2013 21:42

Lovely, poignant stuff.
Best wishes Starfish

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Sep 2013 19:42

Very tight and neat, Thomas (although I question the wisdom of waiting till they die to have another beer).

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