The Car
The car 'stutters' its response to cold ignition,
hesitant and sleep heavy,
lurching into some sort of limp wakefulness,
but resistant to movement.
The driver mutters obscenities to the dash board,
cold breath full of impatience,
attacking the innocent air with impotent steam,
filling the car with sharp spite.
The passenger prays silently for a miracle,
then quietly speaking, gently coaxing,
well worn words of compliant encouragement to both-
car starts, driver glowers , passenger sighs .
alan barlow
Fri 27th Mar 2009 01:43
i reaaly like the way i can relate to the car each day and the car almost takes on a human trait the way you have "penned" the piece and i enjoyed the ditty like ending of the last line too