Blackened berries
with berries,
and your laugh
with your face:
with your tears,
and your laugh
with your smile:
with time,
and your laugh
with your kindness:
class act again Tommy - there's a real heart beating behind that hard bastard exterior - and if you're not careful folk will cotton on :-) really enjoyed this - as always a simple form but with so, so much power in every word and phrase - no excess fat on these bones mate - just raw emotion - brilliant!
<Deleted User> (11553)
Tue 15th Oct 2013 21:47
Sensitive and quite touching. Thank you.
Just...beautiful. Had me welling up there Tommy.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Fri 18th Oct 2013 11:27
I searched all the way back to 2009 to find the first post. You've done a lot! I'm glad you have reposted: it must be a personal favorite.