Blackened berries

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I will blacken my tongue
with berries,
and your laugh 
will crack your smile;
with your face: 
always your face.
 
I will dampen my tongue
with your tears,
and your laugh 
will soften this land
with your smile: 
always your smile.
 
I will comfort with words
with time,
and your laugh 
will open this prize
with your kindness: 
always your kindness.
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Tommy Carroll

 

◄ Liverpool Tate

...and in conclusion ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 18th Oct 2013 11:27

I searched all the way back to 2009 to find the first post. You've done a lot! I'm glad you have reposted: it must be a personal favorite.

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 16th Oct 2013 19:00

class act again Tommy - there's a real heart beating behind that hard bastard exterior - and if you're not careful folk will cotton on :-) really enjoyed this - as always a simple form but with so, so much power in every word and phrase - no excess fat on these bones mate - just raw emotion - brilliant!

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Tue 15th Oct 2013 21:47

Sensitive and quite touching. Thank you.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 15th Oct 2013 14:09

Just...beautiful. Had me welling up there Tommy.

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