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...and in conclusion

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My knowing you

APHASIA
Individuals with Receptive aphasia may speak in long sentences that have no meaning...

IS STORMING THROUGH
Individuals with Anomic aphasia have difficulty with naming. ...

LIKE THE WASTED
Individuals with Expressive aphasia frequently speak short phrases that are produced with great effort... 

TRAIN LINE TANGLE
and is caused by developmental issues or damage to the anterior regions of the brain...

OF THE WORD SPATE
THAT THE CONFETTI FICATION OF MEANING
...and then there's forgetfulness 

HAS ALL ABOUT ME THE POINTLESS EFFORT
OF MY TONGUE
...and the lost direction of that wasted search

 
...and in conclusion
MY TSUNAMI CHIMES
ITS DIZZY BRAIN CELL PATTERN
LIKE RINGING BENDS OF THINKING
 
 

 

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Laura Taylor

Tue 22nd Oct 2013 10:25

What an unusual poem - fantastically interesting structure, and 'confetti fication' - love that!

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barrie singleton

Tue 22nd Oct 2013 02:29

Hi Tommy, I popped into thank you for kind comment on mine, a few years back, BUT utterly arrested by the poem! An area of 'life' that fascinates me. Your approach very creative (need a better word). Thanks.

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