Hold me - when does the giving ever stop?
Hold me
''It starts like this''
hold me
get to bed
for just a minute
ok
I need to be held
ok
tight
ok
ok
I need to smell you
between your thighs-
through fresh panties-
after you have showered
pushing my nose against
the plump swell of your pussy
whist talking to you
smelling you
smelling your pussy
tracing your moist lips with my finger
pushing the tip of my finger into the swell
of your pudenda
hot and damp from your shower
moist from my attention
your panties creased by the probing tip of my tongue
oh god
''When does this giving ever stop?''
and always your smell
to kiss your warm giving fullness
tripping the hem of your panties
to show me your 'man's desire'
licking so lightly,
the moist lips of your womanhood
around and into the slit
deeper into the slit
my nose against the
darkening folds of labia
god baby
the heat against my skin
the aroma of the wetness
that seeps from within
the taste of that wetness
the sounds of that licking
the groans from that licking
your squirming
and tensing... and the probing
tongue and finger
working as confederates in their task
wetness a prize
lips unfolding
giving
pinkness emerging
fingers deep within
tongue darting about
Tommy
Fingering
Sucking
smelling
tasting
feeling the pleasure running
your pussy open to my gaze
your pussy exposed to my wants
smelling your pussy
smelling your cunt
watching your cunt writhe
your shuddering grow
my cock wanting refuge inside of you
to feel you grip my cock
and milk me of my cum
to spurt and judder
oh god baby god
oh god
''When does this taking ever give back?''
cum babe
cum my baby
I love you
I love you my sweet
Oh Tommy
thank you
Hugging you
kissing your neck
squeezing you against me
I am looking forward to
the tangle time of legs and breathing-
after love making
our love making
I imagine it everyday
x
then sweet sleep
I love you
deep restful sleep
yesi can now
x
bye babynite
goodnight my sweet
xxx
Tommy Carroll
20:01
xxx
words and foto T Carroll re-edit
Shevaughn
Tue 31st Dec 2013 08:03
Tommy,
Wow this poem is very well written, while reading it was like a movie playing in my mind (in a good way haha). I felt the intensity that you are portraying through this poem with every line. The passion that you and your then lover,mostly U, show,is magnificent.
Everybody has different perceptions of a poem.Many have judged mine by telling me how to write it,hell,that's my job not their's! But even then,there's no stopping people from doing that.
You are right,affection is blatant in your poem,Theres no doubt about that whatsoever. The way you have put your emotions down to writing is really gripping and arresting,When I reached the ending,I wanted to yell out "Tommy don't stop!!" Haha I mean the only thing I didn't like about your poem is the fact that it came to an end!
--Shevaughn.