haiku 'Fauteiulle'
My thighs rise like wings.
I am an armchair:
you
a hand reaching for coins.
Comments
My God Freda...bring it on. A night in front of Corrie will never seem quite the same again.
I blush at the very thought of rummaging for that 'loose' change. What have you done?!!
:)
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Sat 28th Mar 2009 09:44
Hi Freda,
very good. ha ha.
I reckon it must have been a woman who invented slanted pockets in mens trousers.
She deserves a medal.
Janet.x
Freda - I remember well your performance of this at the Hebden WOL night. It was absolutely the highlight of the night. A gift to us all this little gem of a poem. Brilliant stuff. Winston x
The Banks have a lot to answer for....
Brilliant as ever!
Well done Freda
Gus
Hi Freda,
I'm not sure what it says about my armchairs, but I usually end up with no more than a handful of fluff! Irreverent and bawdy - that's the stuff! May I suggest you drop in here?:
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/newsgroupview.php?NewsThreadsID=764&NewsGroupsID=3
Regards,
A.E. :-)
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shoeless
Mon 30th Mar 2009 08:34
i like this , it leaves me a little open mouthed when i make the image in my mind :)