Darling - Please Don't Call Me 'Dear'
I sit and wait for my Darling babe
To come and tell me
What
The fuck
To do.
She doesn't know I swear so much;
That I was once
A rebellious
Teenager
Too.
All my life - ALL of it -
It's still there, you know!
I know.
She sees only a segment, thinks I
Belong in care -
Or on death row.
I once walked miles my way,
All alone in shoes I chose;
I travelled worlds of wisdom
Around what she thinks she knows.
But of course, you know what's best for me -
I'm a worry, yes it's true.
Though my Darling -
Please don't call me 'Dear'
Or you'll see just what I
CAN
Still do.
Tommy Carroll
Sat 19th Jul 2014 19:57
Ha- It's great to swear in a poem- even if it is no point, however your use is spot on. I can and did imagine it being said to an elderly lady- the first stanza speaks of world of such a feisty one. Tommy (apologies for my grammar, having a bit of a turn lol ;) )