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This time on a sunny day

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Sometimes on a sunny day, early, 

earlier than the busses,

before the traffic around my house

has time to make me reach

for the radio news, and

look day straight in its face.

Sometimes I search out from under

the debri of tasks ahead that have me sighing-

at folders of forms and issues to confront.

Sometimes with the back door open,

accepting the light to pool on the wall, 

and floor, and fresher air to stare.

I this time 'heck' it and

find Coltrane and Ballads 

and coffee and gaze and

now I think of her.

 

25 July 

words and foto T Carroll

 

◄ I leant against the wall

Algiers ►

Comments

Preeti Sinha

Sun 17th Aug 2014 10:54

How you have managed to weave the mundane with a little spark of something, or 'someone' special...

Lucky is she who occupies your thoughts :)

Beautiful writing, Tommy

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charliebrogan

Mon 11th Aug 2014 22:52

This is beautiful,

'I this time 'heck' it and

find Coltrane and Ballads

and coffee and gaze and

now I think of her'

Upon reading that I felt it in my stomach!!

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winston plowes

Sun 10th Aug 2014 22:06

Loved before the busses. and the last line. great writing Tommy

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Martin Elder

Sat 26th Jul 2014 23:11

Hi Tommy
really like this, particularly the lines
' sometimes with the back door open,accepting the light to pool on the wall and floor and fresher air to stare'.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 25th Jul 2014 11:38

...someone has allowed me to Helen, but I'm weary of telling her. Tommy

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