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Love

As I stepped in to my dress today

You told me I was beautiful

For the first time in my life

I believed it.

 

I love you, my son.

true love

â—„ Freedom Sky (Haiku)

Angel â–º

Comments

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 28th Jul 2014 20:22

Hi Helen.My daughter(19)really doesn't mind which attire I step in or out of,so long as it has at least one pocket for my purse that she more times than I would like,has a not so little dip into.

awww bless-yeah right!

Good poem.x

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 26th Jul 2014 21:01

A child's truth is as pure a truth as can be. Tommy

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