Freedom Sky (Haiku)
A bird soared freely
Above the sunflower fields
Until the gun fired
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I love the restraint of a Haiku and this is great. Really like it.
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Phillip Kelly
Wed 13th Aug 2014 23:24
WOW......SUCH A SIMPLE IDEA...yet so effective....please could you offer me any tips for haikus?? mine alwyas too complicated deep..