Just the three of us.
Frightfully aware, my bejewelled, dripping self,
Frightfully aware, my bejewelled, dripping self,
probably my favourite of yours so far, Charlotte - great throughout but the first four lines really pulled me in. well done x
This is really good - the diction, the imagery, the atmosphere built on details. But most of all the theme -the 'posing' - literally and figuratively, with ruthless intent, which is neatly re-phrased in conclusion. Juxtaposed against fragility!
Check 'the one who marks her letters...' to avoid a grammar misstep at the very end.
I must do some catching up on your works.
I like this, being both articulate and nearly mute at once raises the intimacy of the poem. Very touching. Best wishes, Dom.
''things'' or ''thighs''? Tommy
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Preeti Sinha
Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:57
This is as gorgeous as you!
Love it.