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<Deleted User> (9882)
Sat 13th Sep 2014 21:43
maybe-'pockets of his pondering EXHALATIONS'?
great poem,nevertheless!x
(said in a stiff slightly confused manner lacking all natural inflection) ''I am from planet 5K-J890 Alpha and I know not what 'pocketsofhisponderingexhale' means, please explain please.
You're a cheeky bleeder Tommy Carroll! :D
excellent stuff. i can really see this.
particularly like 'pockets of his pondering exhale' but a top piece all round.
Ladies have you no house-work to do?
Mmm beautiful- could almost see smoke swirling around this.
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Preeti Sinha
Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:55
"Just to taste
for a moment, what it is like
to unfold the meaning of it
all with colour."
This is beautiful, delicate and so tender.
Love it, Charlie :)