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I never sleep

entry picture

When

looking at you,

I never...

counting your breaths,

I never...

watching you dress,

serving a dish...

writing a report...

choosing a wine...

turning  a page...

sitting astride...

waiting to... 

folding your arms and

pushing toes into:

sighing at an excuse:

holding my face:

yes:

holding my face:

When holding my face.

◄ This is how I nearly died

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Comments

Preeti Sinha

Sat 27th Sep 2014 18:05

Tommy, you do have it bad :0
How you make your words come alive: visually, textually. I am imagining the situations as they unravel, line by line.
Loved this one, Tommy. Any pics of this goddess who enthralled you? :0
Preeti

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