Train window
I thought I knew someone
standing accross the road,
she was waiting for a gap in traffic...
Then, there was another time,
alighting from a cab
and carrying fancy bags...
There she was again
-I think-
seated opposite me
on that train from Liverpool,
but that was just a reflection...
There was one time at a party
when she smiled
my way, I thought, but it was
for her friends...
We both shouted an order
at a crowded bar,
I turned to greet her
then we where seperated
by a shoulder and I was asked
for my order...
Maybe she was a stalker-
with bags of fancy shopping?
She would smile at passers by
-a neighbour perhaps-
that must be it...
Then she moved away,
as she stopped singing
in my garden nor laughing
at my jokes.
But she left me a
sodden letter, hand delivered
through my letterbox
but I was too busy
to stop and read it,
I left it for another time:
I had a dull rainy day to walk.
words and foto T Carroll
Preeti Sinha
Sat 27th Sep 2014 18:02
I agree with Daniel. Your work is very deep, very personal. Did you finally read what the sodden letter said or are you actually speaking metaphorically about a woman you have lost?
Then she moved away,
as she stopped singing
in my garden nor laughing
at my jokes.
Very touching, very sad.