Semi tone
'Place the valve
of your lip's
and your smile's
breath against
my cheek and
breathe a note
and inform me
of its lasting arrangement
and gentle proposition
while sighing
from within.
you play now
the music's
pressed tone.'
words and music T Carroll
re-edit
Martin Elder
Tue 7th Oct 2014 22:53
I love this Tommy. You are so succinct, saying so much with a few well chosen words.
Place the valve to your lips
and your smile's
breath against my cheek and breathe'