Semi tone

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'Place the valve
of  your lip's 
and your smile's 
breath against 
my cheek and
breathe a note
and inform me
of its lasting arrangement
and gentle proposition
while sighing
from within.

 

you play now
the music's 
pressed tone.'

 

words and music  T Carroll

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Martin Elder

Tue 7th Oct 2014 22:53

I love this Tommy. You are so succinct, saying so much with a few well chosen words.
Place the valve to your lips
and your smile's
breath against my cheek and breathe'

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