A performance of equality-
when their eyes
are reflective of me.
When their way of life
or philosophy
might be something I dreamt up once
doing a cartwheel in primary.
Those beautiful lads of great design?
I made them in my leisure time!
If anyone's ribs came from
anyone's ribs-
their's came from mine.
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Fri 10th Oct 2014 16:41
sooooooo well done Clever Cath.x
I like this one a lot. So much said and to the point.Nicely packaged. I look forward to more
Clever title. Great poem. Mother's love.
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Cathy Crabb
Sun 26th Oct 2014 15:49
Thank you eveyrone, I really appreciate your comments. It is hard to get your head around making a man. Holding a baby, well that's one thing, but an actual man...mind blowing x