Coin 38
the sky was a flat metal
he could smell the dusky
smell of a coat discarded,
damp and full of dust,
on a bench as he passed.
and, even now, as
the wind pulled the hands
of his scarf around
in frantic circles
he thought of the quick flick
of her hand as she tossed
a cigarette, half-burned and
orange with inward fire
onto the sidewalk
Cate Greenlees
Fri 17th Oct 2014 16:12
Im not sure why but I really like this. Its almost like an artists oil painting in words, short and vivid.
Cate xx