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Coin 38

the sky was a flat metal 
he could smell the dusky 
smell of a coat discarded, 
damp and full of dust, 
on a bench as he passed. 
and, even now, as 
the wind pulled the hands 
of his scarf around 
in frantic circles 
he thought of the quick flick 
of her hand as she tossed 
a cigarette, half-burned and 
orange with inward fire 
onto the sidewalk

scarf

◄ Morning Glory

For An Evening ►

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 17th Oct 2014 16:12

Im not sure why but I really like this. Its almost like an artists oil painting in words, short and vivid.
Cate xx

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