Her parted lips
Folded gently like
the hidden memory
of her smile,
Her parted lips
in silence
said more than
spoken breath.
Comments
Hello Tommy
I really like the subtlety and simplicity of this
Ged
Brilliant, Tommy, this really works as a poem now.
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Graham Sherwood
Sat 31st Jan 2015 18:02
Hello Tommy, just browsing after your enquiry about not seeing your work on the main page but I found this straight away. I am sure they'll work out the problem, the good thing is others can see it okay.
regards,
Graham