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Knowing the moment

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Before the blood

that has time to seep;

before the shock of

sliced flesh;

of contracted muscle;

before the realization of

the truth of the pain to come;

there is a moment

when mortality is felt

most keenly-

all else derives from

its recovery.

...

words and foto: Tommy Carroll

◄ Her parted lips

Conflation (a work in progress) ►

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<Deleted User> (10960)

Tue 10th Mar 2015 06:56

That which does not kill us makes us stronger - Fredrich Nietzsche.

Nice one, Tommy. Enjoyed :)

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that bloody poet

Sun 15th Feb 2015 20:45

I was pleasantly surprised to find your poem. It's such a powerful image! Thanks!

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Martin Elder

Sun 8th Feb 2015 23:28

There is a moment when mortality is felt most keenly.I love this Tommy. It has got such a good pace all of its own. Nice one

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