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Breathing Liquor

Liquor, such a licentious name,

I hear it whispered on TV,

my hair stands on end.

I move the bottles out of sight,

to negate their seductiveness.

They cry to be held or treasured.

The weakness of wine glasses,

resonating when they are washed.

They are true to their purpose at least.

I pour a scant amount,

measuring with molecular like precision.

I swig it back without savouring.

Alone, my struggle not to hear

is like atmospheric pressure building.

Another bottle will help me to breathe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 10:04

I wrote a REALLY similar poem to this a few years ago

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 4th Mar 2015 14:30

Hi Emma, like the wine glass, your post resonates. One large vodka raw against the throat and all your itches are scratched. Until the throat itches back. Tommy

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Emma Stradling

Mon 23rd Feb 2015 19:26

Thank you Jackie Phillips. I was hoping to depict someone who is a problem drinker and how hard it is for them not to drink. I'm glad it's strong as I feel the subject matter is too.

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Jackie Phillips

Mon 23rd Feb 2015 13:58

Hi Emma - I have to agree with Greg, this is definitely a strong poem.

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Emma Stradling

Mon 23rd Feb 2015 13:37

Thanks Greg. Yes there is a typo. Will now attempt to edit.... Emma

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Greg Freeman

Mon 23rd Feb 2015 13:31

This is a very strong poem, Emma, the first three lines particularly effective. There's great tension here. I admire the economy of it. Just one thing ... is there a typo on the last line? Should "with" in fact be "will"? Good to see you back on the site. Greg

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