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Is this what borders do?

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[In Algiers I held a glass

that held a face's stare

In the glass

the face that stared

stared back at me in fear.]

 

We came upon slowing traffic.

 

Inside the war-torn bus

standing passengers were gently rocked

We drove along an unfinished road.

unfinished roads, were you

become convinced

that each rock and pothole

were placed carefully in order

to discomfit passengers,

to remind them of their poverty

or the slumming middle-class

of the acre sized swimming pool that awaits.

 

We passed the sun-glassed occupants

of cars and busses

and the rolled-up sleeves of lorry drivers.

Tanned arms hung out of windows;

fingers tapping an unheard beat.

 

I stooped to stare at the dancing distance

of heat waves rising from

the baked highway.

 

Asphalt arteries.

 

People gripped passports,

Identity papers, rosary- beads

- Letters of transit -

but were not needed;

the border did what most borders do-

it shrugged us through.

 

Smiles become all languages.

 

Later, I sat staring out the window of a bar.

Hardly blinking.

A bus stopped and people got off.

A dog scratched.

The sky was blue and cloudless.

I lifted a cold drink.

Watching.

Then Jez turned to me and asked:

"Is this what it's like to be drunk?"

I smiled as I slid my wine towards her...

 

words and foto T Carroll

Re-draft no 6

 

 

◄ Advice given to a Lady upon wishing to tell a joke in public

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 23rd May 2015 05:21

Hi Tommy, really enjoyed reading this, love the description ands sounds spot on, cheers Jeff, ps thanks fro reading and posting about 'Austerity no more' yes no great solution, I just hoped an alternative result may have been a bit better :-(

<Deleted User> (13740)

Sat 9th May 2015 01:35

I like this, and remember such fears of passing through borders :) excellent stuff

I like the line,
the border did what most borders do, it shrugged us through :)

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