Vertices
Jan folded the letter
running a finger
along its crease.
She looked up-
somebody was explaining
functionality:
She stared
at the new argument
written on the white board
then returned to the letter-
the fold
another plane
pressing and creasing
vertices missing
corners peaking...
Sighing:
His orientation disengaged
they were now misplaced.
Incongruent.
She rose
and left the room.
There would be
many such lessons.
words and foto Tommy Carroll
re-edit
Tommy Carroll
Mon 11th May 2015 19:30
I have rewritten this work 3 times. I feel a bit obvious in asking you this, but if you would like my latest version I will be honoured. Tommy