Vertices

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Jan folded the letter

running a finger

along its crease.

 

She looked up-

somebody was explaining

functionality:

She stared

at the new argument

written on the white board

then returned to the letter-

 

the fold

another plane

pressing and creasing

vertices missing

corners peaking...

 

Sighing:

 

His orientation disengaged

they were now misplaced.

Incongruent.

She rose

and left the room.

There would be

many such lessons.

 

words and foto Tommy Carroll

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Mon 11th May 2015 19:30

I have rewritten this work 3 times. I feel a bit obvious in asking you this, but if you would like my latest version I will be honoured. Tommy

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 10th May 2015 08:43

This is brilliant. Felt as though I was in the room.

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