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put colour to pale

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I’m high enough to see the rooftops
I grace rain gleefully
process it.
a cycle that never stops
struggling to escape
the bland below
I own sandals that never see sand
chipped nails
and imperfect cuticles, tales of weekly chores
come weekend
from the dresser reach for blusher
they make me a mannequin
put colour to pale
almost ready to hit the town
the closest thing to a sun tan radiance
I glow from within some days
but wearing thin, eroded beauty
waiting, for man to whisk away.
from all of this.



for Steve Garside.
inspired by his poem 'Dancing in the surf'


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shoeless

Tue 26th May 2009 09:16

its 'magic' , the connections that have unknowingly formed between the two poems and the people involved.

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garside

Tue 26th May 2009 07:48

I own sandals that never see sand

thanks for your considerations Pete and glad that the poem inspired you

steve x

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Francine

Sun 24th May 2009 16:10

J'adore ces lignes:
'struggling to escape
the bland below'

'I glow from within some days
but wearing thin, eroded beauty
waiting, for man to whisk away.
from all of this.' ; )

Pete Crompton

Sun 24th May 2009 13:50

thanks.
think I need my eyebrows doing.
they meet in the middle unless I tweezer the eck outta of 'em!

<Deleted User>

Sun 24th May 2009 12:21

reallylike this pete - your work always has an energy and wonderful imagery

(she could dowith having her eyebrows threaded:))

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