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Barrie would a-blogging go

Whether he knew what he’s doing or no

Francine and Isobel said he must – so:

Soon he’ll press ‘Enter’ – but where will it go?

 

 

A TRILOGY OF CARING

 

                                         What is this life if, full of care,                                           

 We have no time to stand and stare?

                                 No time to stand beneath the boughs                                

And stare as long as sheep or cows:

No time to see, when woods we pass,

Where squirrels hide their nuts in grass:

No time to see, in broad daylight,

Streams full of stars, like skies at night:

No time to turn at Beauty’s glance,

And watch her feet, how they can dance:

No time to wait till her mouth can

Enrich that smile her eyes began?

A poor life this, if full of care,

                                        We have no time to stand and stare.    (William Henry Davies)

 

What should I write to be of note

To have you praising what I wrote?

Perhaps I should rhyme boughs with cows

And have them stare, not graze and browse.

Claim squirrels - clearly out their tree -

Are hiding nuts where all can see!

Or liken stream to starry sky

As I aloft with fancy fly.

Then moving on contrive to meet

With abstract "Beauty’s" dancing feet?

Small wonder if the Lady smiles

That metaphor is off by miles!

A poor life this when stuff gets lauded

Which easily might be ignorded.

 

What is this life if full of care

We have no time to stand and stare

No time to lean and - idle - gaze

On riffled field in autumn haze.

No time to linger languorous

By mossy trunk and Lime-bole brush

Where flitting squirrel Pimpernels

Hoard secret nuts in hidden dells.

No time to savour Nature’s dress

Diaphanous - Beauty’s caress;

No time to blend with Her - as one

In harmony till all life’s done.

A poor life this if full of care

We have no time to stand and stare.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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barrie singleton

Fri 11th Dec 2009 09:02

Thanks Julian - apposite ditty. Still have no idea 'where it went' or what is going on.

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Julian (Admin)

Thu 10th Dec 2009 13:21

Barry, a good riff on W.H.Davie's famous poem, one of my favourites, though I always blench at the line with the ovine and bovine references.
Excellent, and thank you.

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Wed 27th May 2009 16:04

Yo Barrie you did it!
You blogged! Well done. Good poem. Super rhyme. Suzy.

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Isobel

Wed 27th May 2009 00:42

Been to a wedding - got back late and had to get a fix of this site before bed. Bravo - a poem just for me - I am so touched. I should be bouncing somewhere with a toad but I seem to keep treading on them! LOL Am off to my bed now which is dreadfully uncomfortable at the moment - think someone must have slipped a pee under there - kids!

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barrie singleton

Wed 27th May 2009 00:35

NOT AN OINTMENT FOR TRAMPS.

The girl on the flying trapeze
Could defy gravity with some ease
But in Isobels case
Gravity has no place
Held up there in mid air by her knees.

As you are breaking the laws of physics I'll post some bogus Eliot. (Oh - and what are you doing up so late?)

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Isobel

Wed 27th May 2009 00:21

Move over William Henry Davies, welcome Barrie. I guess the idea of not having enough time was a good one...
Good to see you blogging Barrie - if I can master it anyone can!
Isobel x

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barrie singleton

Tue 26th May 2009 16:48

That is very kind of you Francine. I will pop off to your area in a moment. I am still learning the ropes.

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Francine

Tue 26th May 2009 13:06

Stupendous!
Love the rhyming, the flow, the message...
Très bien fait : )

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