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"In this revolt, the greengrocer steps out of living within the lie,"   Vaclav Havel.

 

FRUITLESS TOILE

(The fifth Quartet)

 

Time present lies!

That lie within; I live within the lie.

Time past, is a foreigner within a mac

pressing my back in effrontery

as I strap-hang from conception to inconceivable

on a train of experimental thought and light-pedantry.

Before me lies no after-life: termed future

until, prestidigitally, incrementally, it presents itself.

I attempt a stroll, taking tiny steps

and yet, they are too large to fit now

and must be, of necessity, pared, truncated, snipped

quantum-clipped to infinitessity.

Only then may I confront in perverse dual obversity

time-past, passively and future-perfect, perfectly.

For in this diminished existence

the better to fit my circumstance of zero-thickness

 I have brilliance to spare

as Strings of theory, incandescent in thwart

shine though my spectral insubstance

acknowledging thought that sticks the clever craw

and brings Stephen to hawking.

This asymptotic search offers no still point of reward

only finger-wagging, and points subtracted.

The cigarette paper you cannot slip

between my past, set in stone

and that mirror-image future

goes unsmoked as bacon;

infinitely thin.

Upon me there’s a yen to sing

were I afforded oxygen and inhalation.

But either expansiveness is, here, unheard of

as all of atmosphere is nought-dimensional

and every sphere departed, for others more congenial.

I would buy a pet; perhaps a cat

and a patented “Schrödinger Litter Tray”.

But the litter tray to my dismay

is half past – by Einstein’s clock

and half future, where the cat’s not been.

Then, should I accommodatingly stand it on edge

the granules would find no gravity

(far too weak a force to force in here)

quite absent – not unlike McCavity.

But lawlessness cannot be resolved just like that

as that particular cat, you well know

needs space; and that’s denied me

in the dimension-free paradoxical now

that suffuses my cavity.

So raise a glass when time presses

and, on reflection, illuminate the now

as simply the past meeting the future

exactly where – you are . . . . . . not.

A notional time line has no cross-section.

 Do not put too fine a point on it

for that would be, the

VERY END.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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barrie singleton

Wed 27th May 2009 10:20

Hello new friends. I feel a bit guilty that you approve of my 'thrashing of Babygro' output (in my nappy of 72 years). But very full of myself (was that a pun?) even so!
Noetic Fret - you are, indeed, a philsopher as Isobel says; a real philosopher - not someone who constantly quotes the usual (mostly dead) supects. I shall be off to your patch in short order. I think I must return to my default state of excess spleen - just for balance. I'll look out something dark to cheer us all up.
PS: I had to look up 'noetic'!

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Isobel

Wed 27th May 2009 09:28

Very very deep and clever Barrie - I had to read it a few times and I did like the ending. I had no idea that Noetic Fret was such a philosopher also. Time for another brew I think - if I don't electrocute myself on the kettle first - ha ha - life always has that 'element' of surprise...

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Noetic-fret!

Wed 27th May 2009 02:01

......................just to prove that there is no end I'm back again to say, if the futures where I not be on account of the unfathomability that pulls on the nicotine, rest assured I have beat the cat and ran past like a pathfinder keen to break from future wars. Out there untethered from previous ways of...............I could go on but.............will let the future reveal itself and..................

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Noetic-fret!

Wed 27th May 2009 01:26

Hi barrie, is that the cat that fondly colours your flesh while strap hanged from conception to inconcievable on a train of experimental...........well, i digress as they say. Yup, really cool poem. Had me laughing and yet, felt there was some deeper meaning perhaps my swarthy years on the street have not yet beg i see. Fantastic play on words and I have to admit, time, is something I struggle with. In writing and, paying 'them,' on TIME. Stephen Hawkin's would be impressed, as would a previous laureate or two who have it seems, all gone down the road of madness when writing of this issue, lol. As regards, time, even a stopped clock, gives the right time twice a day. But the odds would be stacked against if philosophising of such a clocks consistency. Minutes, it would seem, like the latitude and longitude of mind, have in each a story to tell. You have i suppose lived many minutes, perhaps as the graticules get closer the more you look, time, would come, just like the earth, full circle, but, to be travelled again, maybe, from a different zone. Maybe that seeks a death, but, I differ. For if Hawkin's theory at the least works, in conjunction with Einsteins hypothesis, we could always go back and try again. Always, now there's a thought. Be well blue. I really like this poem. No such thing as a very end.
Mike

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