Konnichiwa
''Konnichiwa"
A voice claims my attention
foreign and disembodied
''konnichiwa"!
I walk dripping from the shower
to the bedroom.
On the bed a fresh white towel lay folded
and upon that my 'phone.
It's her.
Two women in my room
one does the bidding
for the other
The ring-tone
female and Japanese.
I place the vibrating 'phone
upon the dresser.
Taking the towel from
the bed l dry myself and
lay upon fresh sheets.
And sigh.
She calls again.
The voice again enquires:
"Konnichiwa"
in an increasingly irritable tone.
I stare at the ceiling.
She calls again.
I turn my back on her enquiry
and lay staring
with my eyes closed
waiting...
words and foto Tommy Carroll
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 6th Jun 2015 17:06
Oh, I do like this, Tommy. Although I can't yet imagine a Japanese' ring-tone. You pull the readers right inside the room. And leave us hanging for more detail. Admirable technique.
I spent six weeks in Japan some years back, in Tokyo specifically, but travelling about. So I heard 'konnichiwa' a lot.