Calligraphy
Her hand was young
and open,
a generosity
of spirit in its
loops and curves,
and after
'with compliments'
and her name 'Nina'
I envisaged an x
re-edit words and foto T Carroll
Her hand was young
and open,
a generosity
of spirit in its
loops and curves,
and after
'with compliments'
and her name 'Nina'
I envisaged an x
re-edit words and foto T Carroll
Once again Tommy you have skillfully said so much with so few well chosen words. nice one
Taut and tantalizing. The final line is superb, engaging the reader's intense interest. Always a good poetical ploy.
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Joshua Van-Cook
Tue 16th Jun 2015 18:38
This is very good. I heartily appreciate the fine term of phrase and suggestion prevalent in this piece. Nicely done.