look see here she comes
her arrival sends
sparkles
upward through tangles
of fibre and want
and upon arriving I
await her
unwanted departure
...maybe
she'll stay awhile
and
look to see
if she sees me
words and foto Tommy Carroll
Comments
Travis Brow
Wed 17th Jun 2015 10:15
Short and sweet Tommy, nice piece. I think it'd work as well if it ended after 'departure'
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Lynn Hamilton
Thu 18th Jun 2015 13:13
I enjoyed the whole but those first four lines are just so.