taxi

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I smoke and watch her

pack.

The taxi waits.

Then I have a memory

of an earlier departure-

the scent of her

washed skin-

remembering the

ins and outs of

our arguments.

She's smiling as she

leaves the echo of

our space-

laughing as we fail

to finish yet another row.

The taxi's horn reminds us...

I pick through the remains

of her accusations:

those

that she broadcasts.

Then leaving,

sighing,

she drags behind her

-like wheeled luggage-

the life that we once shared.

â—„ look see here she comes

... a can or art â–º

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raypool

Fri 26th Jun 2015 10:57

THanks T C for liking Snails. I checked out Taxi and thought it a fine piece, with a an air of weary inevitability that I have experienced when I was young enough to take that on the chin. Ray

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Mon 22nd Jun 2015 01:24

This. This I have liked from the first line to the last line. And it is a great last time ;)

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Ashley Limon

Sat 20th Jun 2015 09:13

Wow. I was moved by this. Its simple but speaks so loud. Bravo!

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