Cup Final
Shit!
Fuck!
Wank!
Fuck!
Wank!
Shit!
Bastard, cunting, whoring, shit-fuck!
AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGH!
That's better.
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Here are some ideas to show you what I am rabbiting on about! Win
Shit!!
Fuck!!!
Wank!!!!
Fuck!!!
Shit!!
Bastards!
Cunting Punting!
Whoring Scoring!
Bastards!
Shit-Fuck!!
Shit-Fuck!!
AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGH!
That's better.
Hi Sebastian. I guess I feel it need something else to make it a better more poetic piece. e.g. Rhyming / some cleaver twist / interesting shape on the page.Win
I interepreted it so differently. The frustration and outrage arising from the fact that there is nothing to watch on the box but football. You're at it again Sebsastian.
<Deleted User> (6230)
Thu 28th May 2009 01:12
A litany of swear words can be poetic and capture the emotion of the moment, even better than a "normal" poem would.
It is the outburst of anger/dissapointment of a man who really should be more concerned with getting married this summer.
Says it perfectly, I think.
Graham, true. This is not a poem! Win
<Deleted User> (6230)
Wed 27th May 2009 23:29
You are entitled to be utterly wrong, but it IS a poem.
It fully sums up the feelings of a frustrated football supporter, after an inept/heartless display. In fact, you'd struggle to say it any better or with more emotion.
No it isn't. It's a litany of swear words. you would have achieved more doing it in Spanish.
<Deleted User> (6230)
Wed 27th May 2009 23:15
This IS a real poem
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Isobel
Thu 28th May 2009 10:41
I like your new structure for the shit fuck wank theme, Winston. But why not just replace the whole thing with just the one word 'shit'. Go back to writing poems like 'Flirting' Sebastian - it was uncontroversial but very beautiful. And can you see what I am doing? Getting dragged into it all over again. Some dogs never learn new tricks! LOL
Isobel x