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Points

There is no north, south, east or west

Up,down, right or left

Far, near, in or out

Without a point.

No line without a start and stop

No circle without a centre

And no matter how long or squiggly

No shape until a line touches itself

At a point.

No structure in any dimension

Without the meeting of points.

 

Like discussions simple or complex

Of minor or major importance

Long, squiggly, curved lines of ideas

Until the meeting of points

Shapes a plan.

 

Or life itself -

Long twisting curved hours, days, months, years

Of just being

Until an intersection of lives, events or purpose

Structures a shape

Which cannot be undone.

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And what is the point of this little ditty?

An over-extended attempt to be witty?

No point at all if you do not see it -

A waste of thought and language.

Unless the mere idea of thought being pointless

Is anathema to the poetic mind

Or the art of argument

In which case ……………………………………………...

 

Ha! I’m messing with you

Just for fun.

 

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

July, 2015

 

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Lan

Tue 7th Jul 2015 11:11

Really enjoyed reading this Cynthia, everything about it really - the rhythm, the light hearted tone, the layering of ideas, thanks x

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 6th Jul 2015 05:51

Points are as tips. There is always something behind a point.

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raypool

Sun 5th Jul 2015 20:58

This has a profound point to make(excuse the pun). Everything seems to devolve back to geometry, and that is a challenging idea. How rooted we are in form. You might be interested in these ideas as expressed in the holy kabbalah: what is known as the Naples arrangement . I found this in a book called The book of Thoth. Please check it out - great truths.

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Martin Elder

Fri 3rd Jul 2015 18:20

There's a point to everything as described above. This is beautifully thought provoking Cynthia. thanks for posting this. I can imagine you reading this at an open mic at Sale. I look forward to more!

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