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THE RHYME OF NO REASON

Trapped by foolish love I followed

every curve,    a funnel that poured into you

and took me with it.       Old enough

responsible enough

foolish enough for the luring.

As iron filings make sense of a magnet

you drew a pattern in my heart

a new arrangement         and I in my foolish love

chose your design           your being

your smell                        your taint

an uncertain future

 

and suffered the rhyme of no reason.

relationships

◄ MEMORY OF HEAT

LIFE IS DUST ►

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Stu Buck

Tue 14th Jul 2015 17:37

this is excellent and the spacing of the last four lines works perfectly to break up the inner monologue that invariably takes hold when one reads poetry. the pay off line is very clever too.

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