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tasty flesh

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The hour is slim!

the time to entwine

with her

and with advantage

inhale

the heavy offering

from between the jaws

of her open thighs.

Persephone's tasty flesh

renders her cleft

of wet truth-

she can slake this thirst-

can assuage my ache

when, enthralled against

the serpent earth,

with legs knotted,

we lay tangled

in ancient ruin.

 

words and foto Tommy Carroll

 

updated re-edit

 

◄ epileptic fit

"Oh you are a mucky kid" ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 1st Aug 2015 15:50

Very classy -downright beautiful - and you've called it 'Tasty Flesh'! Like a filet of steamed fish!

'the jaws of her open thighs' is superb. How can a woman ever relate to this expression?

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raypool

Tue 28th Jul 2015 18:50

Blimey, Tommy - a nicely turned piece of poetry if ever I saw one. It definitely puts the power in the female context as if you are just serving a portion that's overdue . I hope I have interpreted that right!

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