Vertices iv
Vertices lll
Jan folded the letter
running a finger along its crease.
She looked up-
somebody was explaining functionality.
She stared:
the new argument was written
on the white board-
she returned to the letter.
Another fold another plane,
pressing and creasing,
opening, rereading,
vertices missed,
words realigned.
Sentences brokered
with each new configuration,
yet its meaning reformed.
He- was disengaged
she- was misplaced.
Incongruent.
She rose and left the room.
There would be many such lessons.
Tommy Carroll words and foto ( re-edit)
raypool
Fri 7th Aug 2015 21:57
I have been fascinated by an ongoing feel with some of your work Tommy. I almost seem to be watching the Matrix, as if you are examining one pocket of experience and drawing it out like a thread . am I anywhere close with that? Respectfully Ray