Vertices iv

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Vertices lll

Jan folded the letter

running a finger along its crease.

She looked up-

somebody was explaining functionality.

She stared:

the new argument was written

on the white board-

she returned to the letter.

Another fold another plane,

pressing and creasing,

opening, rereading,

vertices missed,

words realigned.

Sentences brokered

with each new configuration,

yet its meaning reformed.

 

He- was disengaged

she- was misplaced.

Incongruent.

She rose and left the room.

There would be many such lessons.

 

Tommy Carroll words and foto ( re-edit)​

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raypool

Fri 7th Aug 2015 21:57

I have been fascinated by an ongoing feel with some of your work Tommy. I almost seem to be watching the Matrix, as if you are examining one pocket of experience and drawing it out like a thread . am I anywhere close with that? Respectfully Ray

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 6th Aug 2015 18:38

'yet' meaning despite the folding of the paper, this new alignment of words - the syntax of the letter remains. Folding the letter can not obliterate its content. Tommy

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 6th Aug 2015 12:05

Fabulous - not sure why. Why do you say 'yet...'?

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