THE BAROMETER TUMBLES
The barometer tumbles
the rise of an ocean
an exodus of air
the barrage of thick lipped breath
implies vespers
over the shrinking day.
A drover spots the booming wind
sheep ripple as the moan takes hold.
Stones press hard into the advance
the shuddering horizon hears the call,
shrugs its pewter shoulders in a heave
and rain begins to fall.
raypool
Tue 22nd Sep 2015 14:37
Very kind Stu. I was trying for a sort of Ted Hughes atmosphere, a moorland scene. You probably experience more of this kind of thing in Wales than I do; but I have been everywhere man. Robert Frost eh? wow!