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marmalade

take drugs and

fuck girls because nothing

is waiting but worms and

trees and the

deepest blue sky

because im feeling bitter.

◄ Neruda

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raypool

Wed 14th Oct 2015 13:03

A hole in one this, Stu - succinct and satisfying.

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Stu Buck

Wed 14th Oct 2015 09:42

thanks martin. they were off hand and straight down because i was angry but the more i read them back the more i like them. brevity is the friend of the ditherer.

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Martin Elder

Tue 13th Oct 2015 18:43

Killer lines these Stu, particularly the second one which seems to have quite a sharp edge. Once again succinct and to the point. Nice one.

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