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Since my brother and I

Sit stitching wings

Onto butterflies

cross stitch

knit one

pearl one

Release from the jar

We speak not

Of family matters

Of trivial demeanours

Like our mother

Lying in effluence

While my father

Unravels like a spool of thread

We speak not

Of the debt

The dogma

The destruction of

Our beautiful wives

 

Since my brother and I

Create sweet music with

Each other’s ribcages

Like flesh and form

Snuff boxed silhouette

Black crow dreamscapes

We daren’t speak

Of little boy blue

Deciduous trees

Death incarnate

And the rattle and hum

Of our mothers

Bronchial fire

 

Since my brother and I

Lay still inside one another

Acid reflux and shameful glances

Boiled sweet reflections

Mist eye menders

Hospital trolleys ambushed

Sent back to whence they came

We do not have time

For trivialities

Such as life

Death

And the flames that lick

Suck and caress

At our parents ethereal chaos

 

Since my brother and I

Plough fields of youthful ambivalence

With rusted tractor wheels

And rabbits slit from ear

To twitching ear

We do not have time

To discuss the cancer

Or the amputation of limbs

The war in the east

Or the son in the west

 

Since my brother and I

Live only for ourselves

We do not have time

To attend funerals

And light pyres

For those we love

And those we lost

While we were trading places

And melting like wax

Into the eyes of eternity.

 

 

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raypool

Mon 26th Oct 2015 10:51

Hi Stu. Talking of the Moonlight Sonata backwards I did perform The National Anthem backwards once in an old people's home . Slightly better version and nobody had to stand to attention!

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Stu Buck

Mon 26th Oct 2015 07:39

thanks! any opportunity to send fellow poets tumbling is always a good thing! i woke up this morning and played moonlight sonata backwards...

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John Bastard

Mon 26th Oct 2015 03:06

my favorites:
"We speak not // Of the debt //The dogma
The destruction of // Our beautiful wives"

just right right balance of alliterations, playing pauses for effect. and:

"Like flesh and form // Snuff boxed silhouette
Black crow dreamscapes //
We daren’t speak//
Of little boy blue"

sends me fucking tumbling.

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Stu Buck

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 23:10

thanks ray! i guess i have plenty of reserve to pull on when it comes to my youth. but dont we all i suppose. its just something i find quite easily flows.
glad you enjoyed this one.

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raypool

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 22:13

I just love how this unfolds, with questions of how and why as I can only view your inner meaning with curiosity. So many choice lines that I can't name them all!

A real nightmare scenario yet with nostalgia built in. How do you do that?

Thanks by the way about Chalk Pit. Sometimes you can overdo description so I wanted to pull the eye in and leave it wanting more. cheers Ray

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