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Step On

What would

You step on

For a better

Life?

 

Your mother

Your husband

Your father

Your wife

 

Or use your

Child as a

Bargaining

Tool

 

Anyone’s head

So you could

Get ahead

 

Or would

You take

The hand

Of

 

Your mother

Your husband

Your father

Your children

Your wife

 

Carry

All you can

And step

On a boat

With your life

◄ Band Wagon

BY PROXY ►

Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 25th Oct 2015 13:34

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. x

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Amanda Van Gorder

Sun 25th Oct 2015 02:35

I love it

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raypool

Sat 24th Oct 2015 21:58

a very persuasive poem and finely put Lynn. Simplicity is always powerful and the fact that it is in question form says it all. Ray

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 24th Oct 2015 19:59

very good Lynn

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