If I Were A Word
If I were
A word
With worth
What would
You say
About
Me?
If you
Were
A Word
With worth
What would
I say
About
You?
But you
Doesn’t
Rhyme
With Me
So
What The
Fuck
Does
That
Make
You and Me?
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Comments
Concise and clever indeed. Nice one. (... and I have read this more than once as well) ;)
Lynn Hamilton
Tue 3rd Nov 2015 21:56
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm a tad tired tonight so forgive me for not thanking you individually but your comments are very, very
appreciated.
What a great songwriter, loved his stuff. Also check out Alone again naturally . quite poignant. Ray
<Deleted User> (8659)
Tue 3rd Nov 2015 14:33
I can only agree with Ray Lynn, these lines keep drawing me back to read over again.
a satisfying play on words, Lynn and great in its simplicity - your trademark. A pleasure to see such concise use of thoughts.
Lovely. Ray
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Lynn Hamilton
Thu 5th Nov 2015 17:33
Thanks for reading more than one too, Daniel. I really am quite chuffed that people have re-read. :)