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Polyvinyl Acetate Pig

You can 

Huff

You can

Puff

And blow my house

Down

 

I will

Stand my 

Ground

 

Bring a

Friend 

Slowly 

Spit Roast 

Me 

 

Splay 

For all

To see

On your

Banquet table

For three

 

Serve me

With that

Sweet 

Apple

That you 

Shoved in

My mouth

 

I will not

Become 

Crackle

Or bitter

 

You can 

Dribble 

Your venomous

Spittle

With your

Greasy fingers

All over

Me

 

I will 

Make you

Regurgitate

Before

Your acid

Hits me

 

I will 

Inwardly

Creak

Groan

Mumble

Stumble

And

Sway

As your

Gale force

Puff 

Hits me

Full

In the face

 

And as my 

Home 

Comes crashing

Down

My plaster 

Will crack

 

I will repair

This feeling

Of hate

With a large

Slosh of

Polyvinyl Acetate

 

E&OE 

◄ If I Were A Word

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Thu 5th Nov 2015 17:28

Thanks so much all for your comments on PAP and for reading.

It does contain all the elements mentioned but is ultimately about survival.

You have also given me food for thought David Moore!

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raypool

Wed 4th Nov 2015 15:31

I refer my honourable friend to the answer the others gave earlier . Wonderfully descriptive and evocative, and rather sensuous and depraved. owzat!!
A fine piece of work.

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Stu Buck

Wed 4th Nov 2015 08:32

lynn i love this. its bondage, dirty sex, submission, marilyn manson style leather and metal and everything thats great about putting so few words down and having them mean so much. its brave and bold and i like it a lot hence the amount of ands in that sentence.

it also reminds me of this...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NQ4S9ydkMG4

...which is no bad thing

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