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Summers such as these

Mods in parkas

Riding vespas

With a battery of lights and whiplash aerials

One with a Colonel Bogey horn

Ride up and down our road

In the diminishing dusk

It’s hot and I’m not sleepy

The night is muggy and steamy

One of them the newsagents son

A year or two later died

In a road crash

Leaving his parents with two younger brothers

 

It was the kind of summer

That was so hot the tar melted

Then after an almighty downpour

And steam would rise off the pavement and the road

In hypnotic clouds

Like a Turkish bath

These were summers that were spent at

Every opportunity in the lido at the bottom of our road

On the edge of the park

Running home with wet trunks

And just a towel nearly dry

Near that place were the mods hung out at night

The kiosk on the corner

Ice pops, ice cream and cigarettes

Chocolate melting in the sun

The pitch and putt

Where one day with one mighty swipe

A club flew out of my hot sweaty hands

Narrowly missing passing strollers

Soaking up a hazy lazy sun

 

These summers of multicoloured lollies

Joy and childish folly

It was summers such as this

That was as sticky as hot treacle pudding

When t shirts and vests

Were peeled from skin

Like a scabby plaster

When a boy thought each summer would be endless

Suspended in time until a boy became a lad

Who in turn became a man

And the world turned from summer in to autumn

 

 

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Martin Elder

Fri 13th Nov 2015 19:09

Cheers for your comments on this David. Summers always seem eternal when your young and no responsibilities.

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DavidAddington

Thu 12th Nov 2015 17:04

Great poem. I love the style as I have some that are a bit like this, rites of passage kind of stuff and I happen to love Mods and Quadrophenia film.

True about the summer - I have a similar lyric - song I produced about those long gone hot summers, so may adapt it for up on here.

I am going to read some more of your poems.

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Martin Elder

Fri 6th Nov 2015 08:49

Thanks for your comments chaps , much appreciated. I remember these events quite well. Though sadly the lido is no longer there. It was filled in when they built a big new indoor pool on the edge of town near the bypass. sadly a familiar tale in a lot of places now.

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Stu Buck

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 17:32

so much wonderful, evocative descriptive work abounds here, but the killer lines are the last, and most simple. theres a lot of heat and melting going on here giving the whole thing a really nice, subtle metaphor.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 15:13

"Mods in Parkas... riding Vespas"... that was the 'hook' for me Martin. (Went to WOL at the Brooklyn on my Vespa.. wearing a Parka to perform my first poems last year)..

Great visions of when summers were always hot, happy and went so fast and tragedy was only an overtake away.
'Colonel Bogey air-horn'... can hear it as I read it.

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Tue 3rd Nov 2015 14:36

Wonderfully evocative Martin, not a word out of place to distract.

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